Frens,,, ane gag tau bener tridnya apa kaga' dimarih y,
tapi ane butuh bantuan ide untuk cerita pentas drama remaja (melibatkan cukup banyak pemeran) yang ringan kalo bisa kocak,,,
mo pake boso english, dan rencananya 'live'.
sampe saat ini ane kepikiran JOURNEY TO THE WESTnya Sun Go Kong,,, tapi belom nemu scriptnya,,
apa lagi yah?
Mo start latiannya sih bulan ini,,,
makaciii yaaa
ujan lagi ah ujan lagi,,,
Drama Inggris, Ringan, dan Kocak?
The Proposal karya Anton Checkov,
cuma satu babak.
berikut contoh yang sudah diadaptasi ke versi Jawa oleh mahasiswa Universitas Negeri Malang
Skenarionya:
http://www.one-act-plays.com/comedies/proposal.html
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Weits...
Journey to The West mah gak ringan kali..
Itu terdiri dari banyak babak.
Belum lagi ada latihan beladirinya. Trus tata panggungnya.
Malah ribet.
Lomba peluk2an di Citos: 30 November 2013
Lomba dorong2an di Candra Naya (dkt Glodok): 8 Desember 2013
[MENTION=359]ummu_w@rdah[/MENTION] : saya pindahkan topiknya dari dunia ide ke English karena lebih sesuai di forum English.
ummu, drama shakespearre ada tuh yg lucu unik. aku kasih link ya biar ummu bisa lihat2.
http://www.lokerseni.web.id/2011/05/...lliam.html?m=1
Good friends, good books, and a sleepy
conscience: this is the ideal life.
Mark Twain
The Merchant of Venice masuk komedi?Originally Posted by cherryerichan
Itu salah satu naskah tragedi dahsyat, menggambarkan diskriminasi agama di Venesia, dahsyatnya utang,
dan... masuk komedi?
Midsummer meman komedi.
Comedy of Error juga komedi
Lomba peluk2an di Citos: 30 November 2013
Lomba dorong2an di Candra Naya (dkt Glodok): 8 Desember 2013
Midsummer lucu tuh...fantasi ceritanya
Popo Nest
Terima kasih, gals,, aku baca2 ya saran kalian,,, tadi sih kerna dah binun aku kasih vacancy buat anak2 untuk bikin tulisan komedi Journey to the west ala mereka,,, yang paling bagus ntar yang dijadiin versi panggung.
ujan lagi ah ujan lagi,,,
saya punya rekomendasi, tapi gak tau ini lucu/komedi atau nggak
- hans Christian anderson
Spoiler for karya2 hans christian anderson:
- L. frank Baum (The Wonderful Wizard of Oz)
- sir james barrie (peter pan)
- Sarah Josepha Hale ("Mary Had a Little Lamb" (originally titled "Mary's Lamb"))
- Robert L stevenson (,The Strange Case of Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde/Dr Jekyll dan Mr Hyde dan Treasure Island)
- Rudyard Kipling (The Jungle Book)
[MENTION=359]ummu_w@rdah[/MENTION]
journey to the west 2013 versi stephen chow
lucu
Emang ada? (blom konsult mbah gugel) ntar ane liat deh. mksh.
eh, ini tadi yang ane lakuin...
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neofio,,, makasih y sarannya,, tapi keknya my children g akan pick ceritanya Andersen.
ujan lagi ah ujan lagi,,,
@ummu_w@rdah
warga KM bakal dukung....
journey to the west, harus matang ceritanya, apalagi cerita itu ada sangkut pautnya sama salah satu agama. Kalo gak salah Budha?terutama kalo yg nonton itu umum
Ho oh,,, mudah2n by the end of january udah bisa ketemu the best one-nya. latar belakang budhanya memang ada, tapi mungkin pointnya adalah menghadirkan cerita komedi segar yang g romance-romance, an. tahun lalu aku juga kasih proyek sama soalan drama panggung ke anak2, aku minta mereka bikin skript plesetan romeo juliet, eh,,, endingnya juga patjaran kek gituh deh,,,
ini contoh skrip drama taon lalu yg dbwt anak2:
ROMEO, YOU’RE AN IDIOT.
CAST
• ROMEO : 10th Grade, Poor, Handsome, Bad-boy, Loyal, son of MONTAGUE.
• JULIET : 9th Grade, Rich, Beautiful, Naive, Shy, daughter of CAPULET.
• CAPULET : Principal of the high school, stubborn, father of JULIET.
• MONTAGUE : A cleaner at the high school, stubborn, father of ROMEO.
• BENVOLIO : 10th Grade, Best friend of Romeo, Loyal, Mischievous.
• PARIS : 10th Grade, Smart, Nerd, Set up for JULIET
• ROSALINE : 10th Grade, Cute.
Romeo, You’re An Idiot.
ACT 1, SCENE 1. SCHOOL HALLWAY.
MONTAGUE, CAPULET (off scene), ROMEO, BENVOLIO.
[ROMEO walks through hallway. MONTAGUE and CAPULET are heard arguing.]
ROMEO: Is my dad fighting with the principal again?
[BENVOLIO enters scene.]
BENVOLIO: Hey, ROMEO.
ROMEO: Hey, BENVOLIO.
[They high five. ROMEO then points at source of arguing.]
ROMEO: Should I stop them?
BENVOLIO: Don’t worry about them. Anyway, I want you to go with this girl for the prom.
ROMEO: Is she cute?
BENVOLIO: Very. Her name’s ROSALINE. I think she’s in the cafeteria.
SCENE 1 END.
ACT 1, SCENE 2. SCHOOL CAFETARIA.
ROMEO, BENVOLIO, ROSALINE, CAFETARIA FIGURES.
[ROMEO and BENVOLIO hides behind doorway.]
ROMEO: She’s cute. How did you know her?
BENVOLIO: I have my ways. Now don’t just stand there, introduce yourself, you idiot.
ROMEO: Oh yeah. Right.
[ROMEO awkwardly walks over to ROSALINE.]
ROMEO: Hey. You’re Rosaline right? Will you go to the prom with me?
ROSALINE: Um, who are you? I have to go.
ROMEO: Dang.
[ROSALINE leaves set. BENVOLIO arrives.]
ROMEO: Well that was a fail.
BENVOLIO: Don’t worry, there’s other girls. Besides, she’ll be at the party anyway.
ROMEO (unsure) : If you say so.
ACT 1 END.
ACT 2. PRINCIPAL (CAPULET)’S OFFICE.
CAPULET, PARIS.
{CAPULET’s thoughts.}
Juliet’s grades are so low. She needs someone to help her. A boyfriend. That boy, PARIS, looks rather smart, and he’s the math teacher’s son.
[PARIS walks by CAPULET’s office.]
CAPULET: PARIS! Come here. Just the boy I was looking for.
PARIS: Yes sir?
CAPULET: PARIS, I think you’ll be great with Juliet.
PARIS: Me? And your daughter? Isn’t she too young for me?
CAPULET: Eh, that’s fine. You can meet her at tonight’s prom.
ACT 2 ENDS
ACT 3, SCENE 1. PROM.
JULIET, ROMEO, ROSALINE, PARIS, BENVOLIO, HOST, *MUSIC*, FIGURES
[Juliet is making a recording of herself talking about the high-schooler’s prom]
Juliet (talking to recorder): Is this thing on? Yeah. Ok. Hi guys. I’m Juliet, but you can call me Julie. (laughs). I’m at a prom for high school kids. I’m not in high school yet but my dad says I can come because he’s their principal. Cool, right?
[In a distance, ROMEO is holding a camera. ROMEO walks in ROSALINE’s direction.]
ROMEO: ROSALINE!
[ROSALINE does not hear. ROMEO trips and falls over. Recovering, he looks up to see Juliet. ROSALINE is forgotten.]
ROMEO *mumbles*: Whoa. Who’s this?
[Juliet hears Romeo in the ground, their eyes lock. Love song is heard. Paris sees them, rushes over.]
Paris *points at Juliet*: That’s my girl. *points at Romeo* Back off.
Romeo: What are you talking about?
Paris: Just shut up you cleaner’s kid! You’re no good to Juliet. Don’t you know that she’s the principal’s daughter? That’s why she’s at this prom anyway! Her dad asked me to be with her, and that’s what I’ll do. She’s mine, Romeo.
Romeo *ignoring Paris*: So, you’re Juliet?
Juliet : Julie.
Paris: ENOUGH.
[Paris pushes Romeo. The two begins to fight.]
Host: That’s enough. Let’s just play some games. How about truth or dare?
[All silent, Romeo and Paris stops fighting.]
Host *continuous*: Those who gets the flowers has to choose between a dare or answering a question. The dare or the question has something to do with their partner.
SCENE 1 ENDS.
ACT 3, SCENE 2. BALLROOM/GAMES ROOM
[Flowers are thrown. Lands at couple one. They choose dare. Host tells the girl to put make up on the boy. The flowers are thrown again. Lands at Juliet.]
Juliet: Truth.
Host: How do you feel about our boy Romeo here?
Juliet *shyly*: To be honest, I like being around him.
FIGURES: *cheers at Romeo*
[Romeo shies away to the crowd. Benvolio pushes Romeo back to the front. Romeo goes back beside Juliet.]
Romeo: Juliet, will you be mine?
Juliet *shocked*: B-But I-I-there’s a p-problem…I’m moving to Ireland.
Romeo: What? India? Why?
Juliet *doesn’t hear him talking*: And besides, our fathers are enemies, they’ll never say yes to our relationship.
Romeo : Distance doesn’t matter. I will love you, no matter what.
Juliet: Let’s just enjoy the night while it lasts.
FIGURES: *boos* Come on, just date already!
Benvolio: Shut up, it’s their right. Let’s just wait until the night ends.
Host: Moving on with the party…
*MUSIC*: Tisha, Matahari, Nadia
SCENE 2 ENDS.
ACT 3, SCENE 3. OUTSIDE OF PARTY.
ROMEO, JULIET
[Romeo and Juliet are alone, talking.]
Romeo: So? What do you say?
Juliet: I don’t know…It’s far away.
Romeo: We can text, email, tweet, or even skype if you want. Just say yes.
Juliet: Will you be there until the end?
Romeo: If you will.
Juliet: You will visit me someday right?
Romeo: Of course I will.
ACT 3 ENDS.
ACT 4, SCENE 1. INDIA
*BANNER ACROSSES STAGE, 1 YEAR LATER.*
[Romeo is at India, mistaken that Juliet is at India, and not Ireland, where she is supposedly. He calls her.]
Romeo: Hello? Juliet? Hey. This is Romeo. From one year ago remember? Prom? *pauses for answer*..what? Remember me? Romeo? Good, good. Where are you, I’m at India already. *pauses* Ireland? Ireland? In Europe? I thought you said India! Darn it! *pauses* Yes, I thought you were here. What for? To visit you of course. *pauses* A boyfriend!? What? I thought you were my girlfriend…*pauses* okay, could you at least tell me who your boyfriend is?*pauses* what BENVOLIO!!?
[Slaps forehead repeatedly]
Romeo: stupid,stupid,stupid… is he there *pauses* can i at least talk to him? *pauses* great.
Benvolio (VIA phone): Hey, Romeo. How are you bud-
Romeo: WHAT THE HECK MAN !!?
Benvolio: Whoa, chill dude. Didn’t i tell you i got a girlfriend last week?
Romeo: Yeah, you did. But i never thought it was Juliet, why did you do that me?
Benvolio: come on romeo, life is a box of chocolates, not everyone gets a piece.
Romeo: That’s not what forrest gump said.
Benvolio: Okay, Juliet’s feeling a little lonely and i was there to comfort her.
Romeo: what!!?
Benvolio: let’s face it Romeo, you haven’t contacted her in like, 8 months.
Romeo: hey, my dad was fired from his job okay.
Benvolio: Is that supposed to make me feel sorry?
Romeo: you know how poor i am, i even had to get my own job.
Benvolio: hahahahaha. Loser. I guess you’ll just have to get over it
Romeo: i won’t. with who you are now, i bet she’s not even happy.
Benvolio: Juliet, Romeo thinks you’re not happy being with me.
Juliet: uh, Romeo i-i’m actually happy being with Benvolio.
Romeo: really now?
Figures: aye, dude. Who’re you calling, i haven’t got all day!
Romeo: sorry sir.
Benvolio: are you callling us from a public phone? You are pathetic, i guess you’ll just gonna be writing Letters to Juliet now, won’t you? Loser.*hangs up*
Romeo: *sigh* i guess i’ll be heading back to london now.
SCENE 1 ENDS.
ACT 4, SCENE 2. LONDON
[Romeo slowly walks down the street, still depressed after what happened in India]
Romeo: *sigh* I guess Benvolio was partly right, i haven’t even talked to Juliet in 8 months. Well at least i have a job so that I could at least eat, man, that flight to cost me months of my monthly pay.
Rosaline: Oh, Romeo.
Romeo: Huh, Rosaline?
SCENE 2 ENDS
ACT 4, SCENE 3. THE PARK
[Romeo and Rosaline sit down on a bench to chat]
Rosaline: so, i thoght you were going to India for a couple of days to visit your darling Juliet? Why are you back here in London?
Romeo: i don’t know Ros, when i got to India i called her, and it turns out she was in Ireland and that she had got a new boy friend, Benvolio.
Rosaline: really!!?
Romeo: yeah, serves me right for not calling her in 8 months, and even worse, my so-called best friend treated me like i was his worst enemy. He was completely different than when i saw him last year. What happened to my loyal best friend?
Rosaline: Well... Maybe he’s jealous.
Romeo: Jealous?
Rosaline: Yeah, it’s not like it’s impossible. You’ve only met Juliet for three seconds and yet you two look like you’ve been in love for 20 years.
Romeo: You...You’ve got a point.
Rosaline: Benvolio always helped you to get girls, but he never gets the girl he wants.
Romeo: Well, he’s got Juliet now...
Rosaline: What if he’s doing that to make you jealous? Maybe he doesn’t like Juliet.
Romeo: I hope so...
Rosaline: Do you still like her?
Romeo: A little, but... I want to show Benvolio that I’m fine without Juliet.
Rosaline: Is that your way of saying ‘I need a girlfriend’? If it is, well... I’m willing to help you.
Romeo: What?
Rosaline: I, um... I... I actually... Kind of... Like you.
Romeo: Wh—What?!
Rosaline: i, actually already liked you since the first day of high school.
Romeo: but, you turned me down when i asked you to the prom. I mean, what gives?
Rosaline: that’s because i knew that it was one of Benvolios plans.
Romeo: how did you know that?
Rosaline: i had a friend of mine spy on you and Benvolio. Cause Benvolio was being a little suspicious.
Romeo: really?
Rosaline: yeah, i guess he was trying to know whether i actually liked you or not.
Romeo: What!!?
Rosaline: yeah, because he confessed to me when he was about to move away to ireland.
Romeo: and?
Rosaline: well, i turned him down. And i told him that i liked you better.
Romeo: guess that explains why he treated me like that.
Rosaline: sorry to ruin your chances with Juliet, Romeo.
Romeo: it’s okay, i guess she was a little to young for me anyway.
Rosaline: so, do you want to go out some time?
Romeo: yeah, why not. Heck i might get you a free pizza for delivery.
Figures: 500-600 PHD!
Rosaline: that was weird.
Romeo: yeah, it happens.
END
Epilogue
[Romeo and Rosaline walk hand-in-hand as they walk to an amusement park on their fifth date]
Rosaline: I heard this park has an cool rollercoaster, i really want to try it out.
Romeo: Okay, but don’t whine when we get up at the highest point like last time
Rosaline: don’t worry i have you with me don’t i?
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Last edited by ummu_w@rdah; 08-01-2014 at 10:08 AM. Reason: dobel dobel mlulu
ujan lagi ah ujan lagi,,,
[MENTION=359]ummu_w@rdah[/MENTION]
bagus skrip diatas.
btw yg jdi aktor tuh anak-anak umur berapa?
ummu_w@rdah ngajar dimana?
saya baru di KM
9th-10th grade...kisaran kelas 3 SMP sama 1 SMA ya?
gabungan? atau itu cuma grade buat perannya aja?
kelas 7 dan 8, yg nulis barengan ,,,,
---------- Post Merged at 09:06 PM ----------
skrip diatas g diperform live tempo hari,,, mereka rekaman dulu
ujan lagi ah ujan lagi,,,
update progress anak2,,, ketika dapat bantuan link skrip dari neofio aku langsung kasih skripnya ke anak2 1 minggu yang lalu,,, mereka kek langsung 'ngeh',,,, (maklum, remaja banyak fokusnya blakangan ini y),,, trus mereka ada yang minat dan ada juga yang g minat dgn skrip 'teaser' itu,,, diantara yg g minat ada yg ngotot mo bikin skrip tandingan yang bagus,,, so, aku masih nunggu progress mereka yg aku akhirnya mundurin deadlinenya early in February,,, (mudah2n sudah ada progress baik dr anak2 nanti, amin)
ujan lagi ah ujan lagi,,,
@ummu_w@rdah
diundur jd februari, ya
padahal pas moment imlek
Last edited by neofio; 30-01-2014 at 02:57 PM.
update,,,
it's not such an easy thing to arrange this drama project with teenagers.
students grade 8 refused the Monkey King idea,,,
i offered them to write other scripts,,, no one came to me with ready the script.
last week the school assigned us that the drama should be presented on May 17.
Pffh...
Well, the students have also many academic schedules to fulfill....
say that,,, tomorrow many year 8 students will fly to Russia for two weeks, they have a traditional dance competition there,,,
this week there is a mid semester test,,, parents won't allow their children to practice drama, will they?
Early on May, year 7 students will visit Pare for ten days...
i have to push them,,, yesterday i decided to pick 4 students to pick a theme and discuss the drama script and to write it.
Today,,, alhamdulillah I've got this...
Spoiler for skrip:
they still have to finish the script tomorrow,,, and hopefully the script will be ready for our first rehearsal on Thursday... wish me luck!
WOW mau pd ke rusia ya.....
nanti ketemu masha
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